Nice
Not bad but I feel there could have been more animation rather than fade outs and tweens. The direction was pretty good and the mood was well set. You do need to work on your drawing skills. Work on the human form and stop using traces from official works. I noticed the first view of the girl was basically Rukia from Bleach and others I think were of Orihime. You won't get any better from tracing. References are fine and perfectly ok. Use pictures of real people and get a feel of how the human form looks.