A shame!
I was really getting into it. Was the best flash I'd seen in a long while. I hope you fix it soon as I can't wait to see the whole thing!
A shame!
I was really getting into it. Was the best flash I'd seen in a long while. I hope you fix it soon as I can't wait to see the whole thing!
Underrated
This reminds me of one of my first flashes. Very choppy animation but it works wonderfully.
I liked your Equilibrium references and the made up weapons were a nice touch. Don't us guys wish we could do that!?
Nice work, man. Well done.
It was ok
It was watchable, however something bothered me...
"there", "their" and "they're"
That's all that bothered me! :)
Hah!
Need to play that game. Didn't touch it on the Orange Box when I had the chance. The animation was great and I especially liked the Weighted Companion Cube in the background!
Very impressive!
The art work, story and direction were all fantastic however I found a little bit of the animation maybe a little hastilly done from quick, abrupt tweens to next to no animation at all (Like the crowd in the town running about in the foreground). If you're going to have subjects in the foreground, they should be just as detailled and have just as much attention payed to as the central subject.
That was the only thing I noticed that could have been improved on but the rest absoloutly stunned me.
Also, kudos for the very accurate perspectives on the heroine, especially as the camera angle was changing. Very well done!
As usual
Absolutely stellar animation. If you're not a professional animator, you should be!
get there!
Great first flash! Carry on working and step up the quality. Slowly but surely you'll be good!
Good
For a first flash it's pretty good. You've demonstrated a good understanding of tweening and you've produced something quite interesting. If it had been finished, I think it would have been good to watch. Keep it up. You're gonna get better and faster the more you work on Flash.
Residing in the UK, studying at Plymouth College of Art and Design in animation. Take inspiration from Japanese animation and graphic novels. My favourite artists are Hayao Miyazaki and Yukito Kishiro.
Age 39, Male
Animation Student
Plymouth College of Art/Design
UK
Joined on 12/10/02